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my only criticism is the drums, they don't really fit

other than general mixing concerns its quite nice though

Very good, only general gripe is the mixing. Its clear, you can hear all the instruments, the vocals are a little drowned out by the song, but it clearly needs some more mixing attention. It does sound really cool though.

TSRBand responds:

Thanks for listening!

I think based on what I'm hearing, especially in the part at around 47 seconds in, my brain thinks we're going into speedcore. Honestly, I think you could try something very similar to this with speedcore, get some dubstep snares and bass pedals and just go nuts, I think that could sound incredible.

Okinasai responds:

You know that’s actually a super good idea. I mean, I don’t really have much experience in speedcore, but I definitely could try it. Still haven’t decided whether to buy the full flstudio tho :/

Pretty good, but I think the dubstep section in general has a very bad mix, the sampled vocals are entirely out of tune with the song, and it makes it hard to listen to. The overall composition and instrumentation is very good though. Just work on mixing, probably less soundgoodizer, sounds like a lot of that.

Gryztecx responds:

I agree 100 percent, the vocals are just kind of a placeholder until i can make and or find something more fitting. As far as the mixing goes i just placed a clear rms from maxumis on most of the stuff. Most of the muddyness comes from my serum presets still need to be tweaked a little bit. Thank you for the feedback!

Its far from bad, definitely. However, I feel you're very much missing the lower frequencies that are really necessary for this genre, and also the drums sound very hollow and empty. Try throwing some reverb on the snare or other.

But honestly, LMMS can do this shit? I use to use this software back in the day and I had no idea it could do something like this. Impressive.

Sicarius771 responds:

Thanks for the feedback~!
Mixing is pretty difficult but I will definitely work on that for my next track. Personally, I feel like since I've been using LMMS for around three years now it's a lot easier to make something like that, but I bought Ableton a little while back and I'm trying to learn that one well.
Thanks again :)

i'm probably completely wrong, but is that fl slayer?

TMNTSam responds:

Wrong. You are completely right. It IS FL Slayer!

i'm the unnamed player

my solo is at about 4 minutes btw

fuck you

I believe this is a great song, however the only thing that does put it back is how loud it is. Its peaking the audio nonstop, and it gives me a headache to listen to.

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